The tiger appeared at Katy and Russell’s wedding unexpectedly. Bravely the security chased off the vicious lion. Husband Russell Brand generously bought wife Katy Perry a tiger as a wedding present, which wasn’t vicious or dangerous. Russell and Katy wished to keep their wedding ceremony private, but the magazine and paparazzi wanted to print the photos. ‘OK’ magazine wasn’t allowed to publish the photos and Katy and Russell want to continue keeping the wedding private, and between themselves. Katy Perry gave her new husband a baby elephant as a token of love. During their ceremony, they had an unusual fortune telling parrot. Katy Perry wore several outfits during the whole ceremony, showing off all the lovely dresses she had.
The wedding was reported to be the most, very authentic affair. The couple sat in gold wedding thrones, making everybody speechless. The husband and wife bought 1,380 cans of soft drinks and 5,000 bottles of water for the guests. All the wedding guests were the traditional wedding dresses.
This is my Katie and Russells paragraph.
Carly
ReplyDeleteThis is a good start. You have included lots of information about the wedding. Just be sure to make the article flow naturally. You jump from one idea to the next really quickly.
It would also be a good idea to start with an introduction to the story so that the reader knows what is going on. For example "This month crazy comedian Russell Brand and singer Katy Perry tied the knot in an Indian wedding...." and then continue from there. Also make sure you use appropriate paragraphs.
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Mr Monahan